To my readers: Yes! I wrote a poem! Thanks to the encouragement of SOL Writers, I gave it a try.
She slides into the water
Gives one last pull on her cap
And a snap on the straps of her goggles.
The water stretches out in front of her
Clear and blue and shimmering.
Only two other people are in the pool
The sun is warm, the sky a bright blue
But a brisk breeze shuffles the palm trees above her.
Did that deter the Sunday crowd?
She slides into the water
Adjusts to the familiar shock
Of the cool water on her warm skin.
One, two, three
Breathe to the right
One, two three
Breathe to the left.
Kick, kick, kick.
She gets into her rhythm.
The body adjusts
She no longer feels cold.
The two other brave souls leave,
And she is truly alone in her zone
Her cocoon.
On her turns, she hears
The strains of canned music
The pop of pickleballs on the nearby court.
But during each length across the water
She only
Hears the water flowing past her ears
Feels her heartbeat under her Speedo
Smells the chlorine
Sees the dapple of sunlight on the pool’s bottom.
One, two, three
Breathe to the right
One, two three
Breathe to the left.
Kick, kick, kick.
Is this what it felt like floating
In her mother’s womb?
Weightless, warm, loved?
The world is left behind.
One cannot check off items
on a massive to-do list while swimming.
Even the Apple watch, which counts her laps,
was left behind on the bathroom counter
Next to a tube of sunscreen.
Breathe to the right.
One, two, three
Breathe to the left
One, two three.
Kick, kick, kick.
Clothes wait in the dryer;
Dishes need to be put back on on their shelves
An unwritten story demands to be typed
Letters and postcards and emails need to be written.
But for now, she is free.
One, two, three
Breathe to the right
One, two three
Breathe to the left.
Kick, kick, kick.

fabulous…keep writing your poetry….
Betsy
Thanks, Betsy! A new venture (adventure?) for me!
I liked your poem! 💚
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Thank you, Chris! I loved writing it!